Essay skills: The atypical absolute terms

28 03 2011

Typically, when we think of absolute terms, we think of words like “never”, “ever”, “always” or ”nothing”.

These are fairly standard, and common:
2010: The book has no place in modern society. Discuss.
2010: No politician’s reputation can survive the judgement of time. How true is this?
2009: Should every country have the right to carry out unlimited scientific research?
2008: Can the presence of a foreign power ever help a country with problems?
2007: The view of the majoriy is always right. Do you agree?
In these cases,  ignoring or not engaging with the absolute term will mean that we will not pass for content.

However, there are some questions that masquerade as regular (non-absolute) questions, but sneakily include atypical absolute terms in them. Usually, if we don’t engage with atypical absolute terms, we’ll still pass (although exceptions exist). However, because most people don’t realise that there’s an absolute term in the question, dealing with it and engaging with the term will make your essay stand out – and make you more likely to really score.

Some examples of atypical absolute terms:

Technology has killed the simple pleasures of life. Do you agree?
How far do you agree that men have lost the battle of the sexes?
No price is too high in the pursuit of perfection. Discuss. (Note: “no” is a typical absolute term)

 

Considering the first question:

Technology has killed the simple pleasures of life. Do you agree?

A common argument would go along the lines of:

Technology has killed the simple pleasures of life because nowadays, many people, particularly the youth, are more likely to choose a game of Call of Duty: Black Ops than a stroll in the park. With the exception of parts of the world where such technology is limited, we are now able to entertain ourselves with a dizzying array of technology-based options – readily-available options that saturate the lives of people. In light of this, the probability of engaging in an activity that is technology-based is far greater than that of engaging in a simple pleasure that is untouched by the pervasive influence of technology.

However, this doesn’t really engage with the term “killed”. To show an engagement with the (atypical) absolute term “killed”, one might say:

Some might argue that technology has killed the simple pleasures of life because nowadays, many people, particularly the youth, are more likely to choose a game of Call of Duty: Black Ops than a stroll in the park. With the exception of parts of the world where such technology is limited, we are now able to entertain ourselves with a dizzying array of technology-based options – readily-available options that saturate the lives of people. In light of this, the probability of engaging in an activity that is technology-based is far greater than that of engaging in a simple pleasure that is untouched by the pervasive influence of technology. However, does this actually mean that the simple pleasure has been killed by technology? Despite the fact that technology is pervasive and omnipresent, can a person, if they wish, choose not to engage in the (somewhat puzzling) pastime of catapulting Angry Birds at green pigs on their iPhones? If a person wishes, can they still go for that stroll in the park? And we see that technology hasn’t actually killed these simple pleasures, because one still has the option of engaging in them. All technology does is give us more choice. Where we find simple pleasures absent from our lives, it is not technology that killed them – it is us.

When it comes to atypical absolute questions, it is worth noting that such questions are far more common in college examination papers (across various colleges) than in the actual ‘A’ Level papers. However, they are interesting questions nonetheless, and they do occur occasionally in the ‘A’ Levels. In addition, unlike regular absolute questions, atypical absolute questions do not require you to deal with the absolute term – but I would always advise students to engage with the term, as it shows a greater appreciation of language and its nuances.

Task 1

Consider the other questions with atypical terms given above and write an argument showing how you would engage with each of these atypical terms.

Task 2

Identify and explain how personal voice was used in the arguments above.





National Education

15 01 2011

Recently, Nexus and the Ministry of Defence (MINDEF), with the support of the Ministry of Education, organised the first ever National Education Gaming Championship (NEGC).

NEGC is the first gaming competition that Nexus, MINDEF in collaboration with the Ministry of Education, is organising to engage youths.

The NEGC is a fun and engaging way for youths to discover what the Third Generation SAF is about. It also allows youths, especially the boys, to learn about defence and National Service before enlistment. Virtual Battlespace 2 (VBS2) is the official game used in NEGC. It is a PC-based virtual simulation training software used to train soldiers in the SAF.

- NEGC

 

Questions:

Education plays a vital role in fostering a deeper appreciation for one’s country. To what extent is this true in your country?

The way we educate our children must change with the times. How far do you agree with this statement?

 





The 50 worst inventions

29 05 2010

A lot of the time, we hear about the wonders of technology, and how something new and shiny will revolutionalise the way we work/play/sleep/ (insert verb of choice). But here is a list that compiles some of our more… dubious inventions.

Questions:

Has technology failed us?

Too often, we use technology frivolously. How far do you agree with this statement?





HP computers are… racist?

23 12 2009
Youtube comments:
jwolfenstein (1 hour ago)
There’s nothing to fix. Maybe an adjust in sensibility that would make white people not to be recognized. You can also try a different light, maybe from the side. I bet that a Korean with a strong white light straight from the front is not going to be recognized, and a Korean is not black skinned. Stop making this stupid allegations. HP may or may not be racist but it has nothing to do with a piece of software.
jwolfenstein (1 hour ago)
This is stupid. It has nothing to do with racism. The computer has to find out that there’s a face based on the differences from one pixel to the next. It doesn’t have human capabilities, it’s an algorithm. Take a picture of his face and analyze the color curve, then a picture of her face. You’ll see that the curve for the black guy is more flat. That’s not racism, that’s physics. His skin color with that lightning makes the picture less definite, there’s little contrast. More to follow.

caseyc82 (56 minutes ago)
@jwolfenstein Yes, it is computer error based on that, true. But this isn’t some shareware code written by a couple guys in their basement. This is a product released by a major corporation for the mass market. That means there were meetings upon meetings about it, testing and more testing, iterations and improvements made. And across the board, there was apparently neither a black person involved nor was that concern brought up. And THAT is racism.

(See this CNN report for the response from HP)

Think:
Is the racist claim a fair one? Why or why not?

Question:
Discrimination will never be eradicated from society. Do you agree?
Assess the claim that ‘advanced’ technology still leaves much to be desired.





50 Things that are being killed by the internet

6 09 2009

Could the internet be the natural selection equivalent of societal evolution? This list highlights a whole range of practices that has evolved (thereby driving previous practices to extinction), with a call for readers to contribute suggestions of their own, to be published in a more complete list.

Here are some snippets from the list:

5) Punctuality
Before mobile phones, people actually had to keep their appointments and turn up to the pub on time. Texting friends to warn them of your tardiness five minutes before you are due to meet has become one of throwaway rudenesses of the connected age

9) The myth of cat intelligence
The proudest household pets are now the illiterate butts of caption-based jokes. Icanhasreputashunback?

13) Memory
When almost any fact, no matter how obscure, can be dug up within seconds through Google and Wikipedia, there is less value attached to the “mere” storage and retrieval of knowledge. What becomes important is how you use it – the internet age rewards creativity

16) Hoaxes and conspiracy theories
The internet is often dismissed as awash with cranks, but it has proved far more potent at debunking conspiracy theories than perpetuating them. The excellentSnopes.com continues to deliver the final, sober, word on urban legends.

22) Enforceable copyright
The record companies, film studios and news agencies are fighting back, but can the floodgates ever be closed?

28) Respect for doctors and other professionals
The proliferation of health websites has undermined the status of GPs, whose diagnoses are now challenged by patients armed with printouts

35) Concentration
What with tabbing between Gmail, Twitter, Facebook and Google News, it’s a wonder anyone gets their work done. A disturbing trend captured by the wonderful XKCD webcomic.

37) Personal reinvention
How can you forge a new identity at university when your Facebook is plastered with photos of the “old” you?

50) Your lunchbreak
Did you leave your desk today? Or snaffle a sandwich while sending a few personal emails and checking the price of a week in Istanbul?

Question:

In your opinion, how true are the claims made in the list? Are these things really being driven to extinction by the internet?





Warning: Obsession over technology may interfere with one’s sex life.

29 08 2009

Today, my husband and I were having sex, and just as I was about to finish he screamed, “Oh shit! It’s 4:15, my strawberries are gonna whither!!!!” and then jumped off me and went to check on his farm on FarmVille. An imaginary farm, on Facebook.

-FML

Questions:

How far do you agree that our obsession with technology is ruining our lives?

Society today has become obsessed with pointless technologies. To what extent do you agree?






Google’s taking on IM

24 07 2009

Behold the future of instant messaging, communication and online collaboration.

Questions:

Essay practice

“Technology has improved the way we communicate.” To what extent do you agree with this statement?

AQ practice

Identify two ways in which Google Wave claims to be superior to existing technology. Do you agree that these are indeed improvements? Justify your answer using examples.





New technologies exonerate convicts, including some on death row

19 07 2009

According to the Innocence Project, DNA has already exonerated 218 U.S. convicts. Sixteen of them had been sent to death row. The evidence of their innocence was under our noses all along. We just didn’t see it or use it.

- William Saletan, Live and Learn, 2008

[full article here]

Which raises the question: in light of the possibility of mistakes in convictions, should the death penalty continue to be used?





Greening the Internet: How much CO2 does this article produce?

12 07 2009

(CNN) — Twenty milligrams; that’s the average amount of carbon emissions generated from the time it took you to read the first two words of this article.

Now, depending on how quickly you read, around 80, perhaps even 100 milligrams of C02 have been released. And in the several minutes it will take you to get to the end of this story, the number of milligrams of greenhouse gas emitted could be several thousand, if not more.

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A single search using Google releases 0.2 grams of C02 into the atmosphere, according to Google.

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Netherlands-based Cleanbits lobbies web sites to go green by either by purchasing carbon offsets or switching to green hosting providers, like AISO.net, a solar-powered data center based in California. And, like Google, Yahoo also incorporates renewable power and other efficiency measures in its data centers.

- CNN

To continue adding to your carbon footprint, read the full article here.





The Day Facebook Changed: Messages to Become Public by Default

11 07 2009

One of the most anticipated days in the history of social networking site Facebook has finally come: the company announced today that it has begun making status messages, photos and videos visible to the public at large by default instead of being visible only to a user’s approved friends.

- NYT

[Full article here]

Questions:

Has Facebook taken away our privacy? Or are we to blame for willingly putting our privacy into the hands of Facebook?








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